by DerekGrant
If you want to be gay, just do it, man. Don't hide behind a faux marriage to a cum dumpster.
Very well written. Read the entire series in one sitting! Look forward to additional postings
Definitely, there is always a grumpy without imagination and probably unable to conceive any story to denigrate a well-written and original story. Congratulations to the author and I look forward to finding our heroes in the rest of their adventures.
Same story as about 99% of these stories you bring nothing new to the table. Just the same bullshit. To bring children into this junk. Makes you one sick puppy.
VERY well written, and great story! I hope you keep writing this series.
You understand the need of the cuckold better than most. I think you go a little overboard with the Natural Order stuff, but that's your thing. But yes, giving my wife to another man - a BETTER man - feels RIGHT. And while it hurts, it's also the most exciting sexual experience I've ever had.
Ignore the trolls!
Sincerely,
Cuckold Paul
Love this story. Very good plot and vell writen. Hope for next chapter soon
Oh my, such an exciting story! David’s desire to clean his wife after being fucked numerous times is so arousing. I long to lick my wife’s pussy after another man has deposited his seed.
Very nice chapter ending! I like the way you do two things at once- you slowly introduce us (through Clare and Marcus) to the world David and Susan will be facing , while at the same time you show David and Susan making decisions that will bring them to that world. Really great writing!