All Comments on 'Tales of a Hotwife'

Multi-part and no indication in the title.

Only had the courtesy to use 1 out of 10 tags.

Typo in the 1st sentence.

All adds up to you having no respect for your audience.

How many times do you have to start a sentence with Brian! Half way through I was sick and had to stop.

Way to many errors to point them all out. By the way, "shutter" = window covering, "shudder" = involuntary muscle contractions.

I felt myself becoming more stupid as I read this, like the author.

It was a good story, but it could really use an editor. Lots of punctuation issues, but especially when wrote women instead of woman multiple times. Still, it was a fun read.

I was drawn by the title. My first hotwife experience was being fucked in our pool by a neighbor, late at night, with the pool lights off, and my husband sitting in a lounge chair stroking his cock while he watched us. It was a surprise to all three of us that it happened, and that is an interesting story, but we totally enjoyed it...again and again. Write more!

that strains credibility with some of Monica's aggressiveness in taking charge of the situation. E cups makes me think though this is a fat chick, so ruins the vibe.

Entertaining story but I’d like to state with all the racism talk in this country why is the term KAREN OK . I find it offensive and racist also . With the sensitivity in this country it should be fair and racism shouldn’t be ok towards all race , religion or sexual orientation. I feel it’s very political and people should stop describing people by there nationally or color of there skin

Good story for first time. But you need to learn to use pronouns. The use of first names became very tedious, and took a lot away from the story. But don't let these mistakes make you shy away from writing in the future. Use it as it is intended, as a constructive critique. Looking forward to reading any future stories.