by Andyhm
Although I don't think there was ever a problem as you have very nicely introduced each character as they entered the story. In fact, even though it has been a while since Ch. 16, (condolences on the passing of your mother, by the way), Ch. 17 picked up seamlessly and I think that is a sign of just how well you managed each introduction. When this story reaches it's ultimate end, as they all do, I am sure I'll go back and read it in its entirety.
OK you said you would finish it in a short while been a couple of years and no wedding or finish yet you added other stories on here are you ever going to finish it?????