All Comments on 'Talk Dirty to Me'

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muskyboymuskyboyalmost 2 years ago

Good story but not much romance.

qexiqexqexiqexalmost 2 years ago

Great story with colorful characters and interesting plot. Especially Beth is charming and her opening up and becoming more daring was nice to read. Lots of potential, too! Hope she'll take the job and manages to get more women to that property! I'm sure she'll have some inventive, humiliating and not so family-friendly ideas to pull that off ;)

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsalmost 2 years ago

Well, this well written and well conceived story touched most of my kink buttons! Beth is a lot like me; I was waiting for them to fuck with Beth bent over the picnic table and Pete insulting her as he possessed her, but the story ended abruptly, at least in that sense. Beside, Pete clearly wanted a blowjob just then. He's that kind of guy, I guess. Great story! Five stars. ~~JB

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This was so fun! Makes me want to find a nudist resort to check out haha

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