All Comments on 'Tally's Tentacle'

Chapter two could be a lot of fun ... where Tally visits all those hosts and helps them enjoy!

A really unusual but also a very hot look at a tentacle story. I hope to see at least a chapter 2 out of this. It is well deserved considering how much thought went into the original story.

This needs a lot of work. You have such monumental pacing issues that it actually ends up destroying the suspension of disbelief. Slow the fuck down in the beginning and establish your story.

It's odd how, without even looking at the username or any bio, one can determine if the story was written by a woman or by a man. That's not a compliment.

That story was a lot of fun! I genuinely found myself sad when Jim seemingly died near the end ... which would probably be the first time I've ever felt compassion for a sex tentacle. I hope you continue the story!

Interesting perspective! Could be fun to have the point of view of an effeminate boy in the same situation and maybe who's interacting with other characters in different stades of developpement.

truly cool and unique

I would ignore the comments from "Anonymous: about 1 month ago titled Work". This is a fantastic new way to approach a sexual tentacle. Sentient above just the simple urge for reproduction, and not malicious. I enjoyed it immensely, 5 stars and a favorite story click. I agree with another commenter about maybe a different perspective from various stages. The one criticism I have would be the amount of offspring per reproduction cycle. 3-5 might be better, or you might run the risk of ending the story too soon, do to nothing left to 'conquer'. With 10+ you will get the exponential growth, yet far less control ability in the following chapters.

Write part two with the boss and 21 year old please

Fuck! Been a while since any story like this has made me cum this hard. Thanks 😊 Keep us cumming 😛

I'm a big fan of this tentacle symbiote genre. Well done.