by veryopenmind
Thanks for a particularly nasty cuck and whorewife story. This one hits all the low points , especially the inference that the cuck is more interested in Mike's cock than his whore is.
This is one of the latest pointless stories. This is completely pointless you have just written a story that nobody will hardly give a “ monkeys to “ . This story fails on all sides the reason being is how you wrote it . A normal story you base the story on the characters which in every day thing is normal. But this site works different you have to base your stories on what the characters do and not who they are. ( this story you wrote feels more of a fetish category than an loving wife category) The reason is so that’s it’s easier for the readers to find stories what they are into ( like yours ) . But the biggest thing is that it’s to build up your confidence and your reputation. But because newbies have swamped the loving wife category with there stories you putting your story into the wrong category it will just fail on so many levels. The loving wife category needs time to “ heal “ because of the bad stories that have been filed in the loving wife category. The only thing making it big in the loving wife category are BTB stories. That is another reason why your story fails . What you need to do is first keep writing you show promise. But you should go try different category’s you should go have fun finding out which is your best category. ( just leave the loving wife category alone it needs a rest lol )
Annon, thanks for letting me know that I'm still in your head, and thanks for being too stupid to recognise sarcasm when you see it.
Wow! A very hot story, I love eating a well fucked pussy until it is completely clean of her partner's cum.
Nailed the steamy heat
Nailed the drunken bad decision
Nailed the cuckold angst
Nailed the wife playing the game for everyone’s benefit
Open-mind or without-mind ? Certainly a ridiculous husband without a male brain.