All Comments on 'Tango with Fire'

Decent story. But the grammar wasn't very good. A proof reader could help immensely. Keep writing though. Practice makes perfect.

Good start to a long story. Maybe ch. 2 can have the Aunts and sisters included to make it a real family affair.

maybe another,and add the other ladies he has been thinking about?

Really liked this story although it was short, there was some grammar issues still a good read!! You need to write more chapters and bring the other women he was talking about into their sex!! Gave it a 4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

written by a semi-literate 7th grader? Dialogue so stilted it makes golf commentary seem interesting in comparison.

I suspect english is not the author's first language, and that makes it difficult to get horny as the story is so bad