All Comments on 'Tarton Ch. 03'

I love the way you leave us hanging. Also, you have a gift for painting the people in your story into real, 3 dimensional characters! I'm jealous of your talent. Now I can't wait for Part 4! Will Wendi become a prostitute? Will Toby's Dad get caught cheating; does anyone care if he does? Beautifully written. Well done, and 5*, JB

A plot? Well, I thought this was just, you know, some strange British confession dialogue........