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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Get an editor

Verb tenses don't agree, many, many sentence fragments, & overall very poorly written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for sharing. :)

princesssub8409princesssub8409almost 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your assistance.

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