by Jus_de_fruit
Next time, play a little more, I usually don't get excited about legs too much, maybe if you had her top come open when she reached for her handbag. And have them tease a little or tease the reader a little. Still a fine story.
I enjoyed how much the cabbie savoured every touch and moment of the quick encounter. His genuine and sincere appreciation of her made up for any issues with the story's believability in my book. Keep them coming . . . I'll read them for sure.