by SallyRichmond
You seem to have some problem deciding what to call Taylor. We all know that Taylor is a "he" so it is probably time to drop the occasional "her" from the narrative.
Agree with the fact that in this Chapter Taylor gets mixed up. Do not agree that you need(!) to decide, maybe sometimes masculine and and other times feminine is a feasible solution, see my prior comment on Chapter 06. Als do not agree that it's clear for everone to see that Taylor is a he (same reference). What Taylor is, lies in the hands of the author and, after that, in the perspective of each individual reader.