by StoryTeller07
Wonderful. It's good to see you writing longer installments and developing the character's mental aspect. Loved the piercing scene and how it impacted the teacher's psyche.
How good this story can it be ? The sky seems to be the limit. Please, keep on this good work.
i loved the way Hollie truly became submissive to her Master in every aspect of her life
She will have to be so careful not to show them at school, yet they will torment her always....... Great work storyteller07 looking forward to the next installment