All Comments on 'Teacher Slave'

Was sort of fun to read and well written - but so unbelievable and ridiculous it took most of the fun away. You need to make your characters more realistic or at least no so unrealistic that it is hard to even imagine something like this happening - the neighbors? Really?

What I like is the ending... People who r greedy should have sauch ending

Good start but totally unbelievable story.

Hot... dreams do come true. Love it all except head slapping and makes...but that’s just me.

I have to say that was a good story but it did have to except turned in. like how or why did Victoria wants to make her a slave? But I did like the outcome of the story. Too bad Victoria didn't take her place as the school slave that would had been funny