by abeer
Soooo hot.....my cummiest fantasies, put into words!! Can't wait to read your other stories!!!
Great little story Abeer....good grammar and excellent spelling....good movement from fantasy to reality and to her complete submission... the ending was just a little predicatable, but tidied up nicely and allowed for a return visit!
Cheerio!
Chris
Well done! Vividly told. Great job of putting us in the mind of the Professor. Nice twist at the end. Good job with the dialog, not an easy thing to write.
Very enjoyable read.