All Comments on 'Teaching Her a Lesson Pt. 21'

Nice chapter but the first few paragraphs of constantly switching from past to present was very confusing.

Looks like the cards are finally falling. Not sure what kind of end I fully expect, but I suppose it doesn't make sense for him to be in a happily ever after scenario with a harem.

I would agree the time swapping was a little jarring at first, but once you realize it is showing the mental struggle Canon is having, it fits.

That hole our guy kept digging? Looks like he has hit rock bottom. He's either busted his last shovel and is stuck (like a pig) or he's about to strike the motherlode.

I don’t laugh out loud at stories on Lit very often. This one left me no choice.