All Comments on 'Teaching Her a Lesson Pt. 28'

You can't end it there, dude.

Dumping his dream girl after admitting he cares about her is a dumb way to end a story especially as all the rest of the girls in his harem are basically brain washed. Atleast taylor loves him in her warped way. His time with taylor was alot more interesting then the first part of chapter

That was confusing. Not sure it fits in terms of continuity. Another canister. Hadn't Canon specifically asked Isa to inform him of any schemes like that?

Maybe its just me as its late. Might re-read it.

@Anonymous, it sounded to me like the second canister is regular Serenex, not the souped-up version that Canon has. Taylor does say "it's just the one can, and it's not like yours or anything," so I think the can she and Abbie have is the kind that just pacifies people for a while, not the kind that allows for true mind control. Perhaps Svalbarding could correct me if I have that wrong, though since all this was posted a couple years ago maybe no one will see it.