All Comments on 'Teaching Power and Potential Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

10 years and that is all that you had. That's not slow but dead on arrival

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Unlike someone 7 hours earlier . . . I think this is a prime example of laying out the basis upon which a fantastic story will come. Nicely done.

Characters identified and everything but the lottery win which has removed their parents from the immediate locale.

So much potential . . .

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