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f8fpilotf8fpilotabout 1 month ago

asimplepink, you are gifted with your use of the language, and your choice to use seduction to arouse your reader. Too many writers here just plow into the "suck and the fuck of it". I borrowed that quote from another author who was also very good at the slow seduction, avoiding the "suck and the fuck of it". Well done.

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Just another writer. I've compiled a Tumblr of all the images that inspired my story A Stranger to Guide Us: asimplekink.tumblr.com. Totally free and not quite totally destroyed by Tumblr.

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