All Comments on 'Teamwork Makes the Dream Work'

It was okay for aa black on white story until you got to the obligatory line of "who owns this pussy", followed by "you do daddy". From there it was nothing more than the normal drivel these stories present. It went from a 3 to a 1 in a sentence. Too bad you got sucked into the myth of black dominance. A simple story of two people would have been enjoyable, this was depressing.

Well done! It was set up perfect. Quickies can be perfect when the time is right.

It is unfortunate you see it that way. I feel like there is a difference between what they say in the bedroom vs what they live. She is still married and with no plans of leaving these are just words to heighten the taboo of it all. I dont think there were any overt ties to any kind of dominance other than the over arching theme here "the team". Thank you for your feedback anonymous user! Discussions like this are what makes these stories fun!

I really liked the story

This was fine! I think it is odd that people come to this site and judge. My only suggestion is to make the story a little longer and a little more detailed. I liked that he dominated her. I also like the way you used italics to show what he was thinking. Well done!