by yesplease17
Sometimes I read a story and think about whether I like it or not, other times I just read it and let my bodily reaction rate it. My cock gave this one 5 stars.
Felt like I was in the room with them, not just reading about it. Awesome sex scene, well written. Looking forward to future chapters.
Good premise.
Rushed to his orgasm, though.
Needed more teasing/foreplay/preliminaries.
Needed some involvement of het its/ass/pussy/mouth.
Four stars.
This NEEDS a second chapter. It’s good on its own, but it left me wanting more.