All Comments on 'Teaser'

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HermesMendozaHermesMendozaover 4 years ago
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Nice short! Good storytelling

FranklyTooFranklyTooover 3 years ago
Great story

Sometimes I read a story and think about whether I like it or not, other times I just read it and let my bodily reaction rate it. My cock gave this one 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good clean fun

Felt like I was in the room with them, not just reading about it. Awesome sex scene, well written. Looking forward to future chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good premise.

Rushed to his orgasm, though.

Needed more teasing/foreplay/preliminaries.

Needed some involvement of het its/ass/pussy/mouth.

Four stars.

1Martiniman1Martiniman3 months ago

This NEEDS a second chapter. It’s good on its own, but it left me wanting more.

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Thanks for reading, favoriting, and rating! I'm new here, so any feedback in the comments sections is encouraged. Constructive criticism is always helpful and I like hearing people's thoughts in general.