All Comments on 'Teasing My Servant Boy'

Why do you need so many incomprehensible English words? I would write everything in Hindi!

Couldn't be any worse if you tried.......

If this is all that your story is going to contain, I would encourage you to learn to write a story, build a nice plot around a theme, work on developing the characters and then write the next two parts. I didn’t vote as I didn’t want to bring your average score down.

I asked with a smile to tease him, "kaise hain, ye kapde?"

He grinned and said, "bhabhi, aapke ye naye kapde saare mast hain!"

"Nightie aur skirt me se kaunsi mast hai?"

"Skirt mast hai bhabi, par nightie bhi mast ha

No clue what u wanted to say…if u want to wank ur little pinkie do it alone ..no need to waste space on this site!

A disgusting male writer trying to write a female story! Yuck u suck! That story is a smelly as Manoj black ass

"This is a three part story. "

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Without a chapter number in the title to warn of this BEFORE opening the story. Easy rating of 1.

This is amazing bro, good work!

Hoping to read more!

Great start....rated 5 stars...now wear a sexy backless blouse and very low saree and see how Manoj reacts to your Indian hot dress...keep writing

impossible to understand dialogues...

I liked this story write all the parts.