by MancUK
Loved that story ,very HOT, had me hard from the beginning, please more stories like that. Love older/younger sex stories, beach, is so hot
Please continue with this storey ,it made me cum a hell of a lot in England
I loved this story it was very erotic it had me wanting to seduce the boy and make him want him as bad as his lover wanted him. I wish I was younger and could get seduced like that. Hell I would even take it now only not much seduction needed.
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I really liked the story. Had to stop a few times so didn't shoot my cum all over my stomach. I wish I could have been the teen boy and had all that cum shot deep inside of my bowels. Write more!
Married masculine bi guy here. So love this type of story. Keep them cumming!
Great first attempt at a story, very well written, good plot line, worthy of additional chapters. Well done!
Prepping a teen boy like that where he gets so hot and confused he can't resist anything the gay man wants to do to him is as hot as it gets in literotica. Keep on writing. Would love to see the boy shared with another man at a sunset beach party.
Keep writing! Had me aroused and ready to cum as the scene unfolded. Loved the imagery and emotional tug.
I really enjoyed the story. You are an excellent writer, and I'm looking forward to many more.
Hot story man. Definitely had me hooked from the beginning. You did a great job writing and should definitely keep it up. And I agree that you should definitely continue with the rest of the week. Looking forward to more of you work
Please write more of the week ahead, this is like reading about my first time.
This amazing. Suspenseful, detailed, and sexy. Would love for a sequel describing the rest of the week.
i agree, this was so good, i hope for another chapter and then another hot story, thanks for sharing
This is a very hot story. Keep up the good work. I almost had one of these youngsters bedded but he got away. Mmmm Daniel.
Your first story was wonderful! I enjoyed the build up and conquest! I’d love to hear more of what happened the rest of the week! Feel free to draw this out and let us hear how the teen boy explored his sexuality and found his rightful submissive place as a great bottom boy!
I´ve read both of your stories so far. And both are really hot! Look forward to more!
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Fantastic!
Loved this story of seduction of the young teen. The sex was so hot and I hope you follow up with more while young Jared is at the beach.
Wow, great story dude!!! I was into it the hole time!!! The way you kept me guessing what Jared would react to next was a tease!! I was hard and jerked off throughout the entire story. The other thing I lied was the reality of it. I read so many stories about guys with 10” cocks flaccid and 12-13” hard!! Give me a break, because that’s not reality. I’m 6.5” flaccid and 8” hard and the guys I fuck say it’s a perfect size.
Anyways, great story brother, looking forward to the next chapter.
Such a hot story and a very sexy young guy. My cock would have been stiff every time I saw him and I'd definitely be wanting to get him into my bed to take his virginity. Please add at least one more chapter about Jared.
Superb story, so well written. I loved the build up of tension as Kyle seduced Jared. Great attention to detail throughout. Keep writing!
Very HOT story. Only issue was you referring to yourself as a gay guy.. a bit redundant and took away from the flow to read it over and over. Otherwise.. I'd LOVE a second chapter to continue on the story!!
The descriptions of Jared were hot but the hard sell and full court press felt just a tad too predatory than seductive imho. For me that ruins any sense of eroticism but clearly I am quite alone in that opinion. Skeeves me out that fact.