All Comments on 'Teenage Succubus Ch. 02'

by AceSpartiate

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SynapsisSynapsisalmost 13 years ago
Good balance

I liked the story. There's a good balance of pure carnal sex mixed with just enough story to make me want to read more. Keep up the good work.

hadescerberushadescerberusalmost 13 years ago

Not many Succubui stories out thier at the momment, loved reading both chapters and look forward to finding out what happeneds next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More?

Been waiting a while buddy. Are you still writing?

Plus it was pretty funny that she didn't get the guy was an officer in the army. Funny

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
joys power

it sounds like Joy is a pyromaniac, which means she gets off from watching things burn, somepeople have it so bad that it is the only way they can get off

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
More!

Quit slacking! This is wonderful! More stories!

AceSpartiateAceSpartiateover 11 years agoAuthor
Time

First of all, I've got around six different versions of chapter three laying around. I hate them all. The characters quit speaking to me, and forcing a story just doesn't work. However at the time of this response comment I do have pending for approval another story about time freeze.

The main character is male.

It's set thirteen years in the future from these past events.

And I've already got about three fourths of chapter two of if completed. Spoiler Alert? It brings the Lillith's daughters back into my stories. Part one however there is no hint of Succubi, but patience and you'll get to see more of at least some of the sisters.

Part one is mainly about introducing the new main character. Will he stay that way? Not sure. I might switch it back to one of the sisters eventually.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

love it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Need a new chapter

Please write another chapter I love reading stories about succubus

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