All Comments on 'Telepathy Ch. 03'

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Dillon2001Dillon2001almost 2 years ago
No good ending for Rachel?

I feel like your ex girlfriend characters never get a second chance, you just wrote them and toss them out. No arc for Rachel? No second chance for Rachel? Does she get a new boyfriend? For this type of story, I would expect a sequel where Rachel gets a new boyfriend, something different for once.

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