All Comments on 'Temp Work Ch. 01'

by TheModrenMan

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zena99zena99almost 4 years ago
Don't Stop, please!

I see a lot of potential here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I can see a lot of chapters for this

It went a bit quick with the pacifier thing and how does that fit in with the hypnotism part may be discovered later. There are so many ideas that come to mind that we are going to be in for a long set of adventures for Ramona.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This is a great story

This is a great story, I hope that you continue with the adventures of Ramona. I would love to see more.

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