All Comments on 'Tennis in the Park'

Good Emi story as usual. A bit jarring that (only) the black guys were described as well spoken and well dressed though. You're a strong enough writer to understand the implications of that, I think.

Maybe that's an intentional reflection of the character's voice and perspective, maybe it's not. For example, using 'African American' instead of the more casual word 'black' was not jarring because that seems to just be her vocabulary.

Just my 2 cents.

Thanks for the feedback. I was just writing about the guys I saw that day. No deep meaning really. Glad you liked the story.