All Comments on 'Terry's Story about Shelly'

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oldsage_1oldsage_1over 1 year ago

Different, fast paced and hot. Hope the Loving Wives crowd doesn't find it they will have a cow!

Thanks for sharing your fantasy and writing talent.

5 stars though I doubt many guys would know what a bodice was. 😍

Cheers

SAGE

RedMockersRedMockersover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks, SAGE, for the rating and the comments. I had put in a paragraph where she told him she read "bodice rippers," and then she had to tell him all about it and what they were. I took it out because really, it was way out in left field and kind of stupid. Sometimes I leave curious words in, hoping if readers want to they can just skip over to Google.

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I usually write just for myself. I have a few regrets from rash decisions; writing my story the way I want it keeps me sane. Somewhere out there I'm sure there is a universe where everything in my life went the way I wanted it to. But it won't be published--it's too long, and ...