All Comments on 'Test for my brother'

Yeah she planned it, but he didn't know that so he video recorded himself raping his sister

Wow, those stupid stuck in videos are moronic and it's obvious they are fake. This should be in non-consentual as it was rape, how pathetic the story is and it was a waste of time reading. Turn the computer off and get a life.

Unbelievable juvenile rubbish.

Really?

That's the extent of your imagination, is it?

Just employ a stupid concept from typical macho male minded porn tactics.

Go get a job pumping gas. You'll be better at it.

Sincerely,

B4PW

Rape is not acceptable.

Was well written and not a true story like most of the other comments want to show, maybe it should have been in the NonConsent/Reluctance section. But is well written and a nice story. Thanks for the read

This story seem rushed. It’s missing a lot of details

Great little short story. Would love a chapter two. It is a bit short and seems a bit hastly written, but still done in a coherent way.

To those who are angry at the NC part, its a fantasy story, who told you to read it? Get over it. How many movies are out there depicting violence that we all enjoy, but we won’t go out and do any of those things will we.