All Comments on 'Test Subjects: 2nd Test'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sick and gross. How come in most stories it’s the woman who is dominated. Sad and untrue

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthorover 1 year agoAuthor

Why would anyone be reading noncon/reluctance stories, if seeing women dominated bothers them?

If it is indeed true that more stories feature women getting dominated, I imagine it's because more authors prefer writing about that...?

Start reading the tags before continuing, I guess, because this story was pretty open about where it was headed.

shmeckleshmeckleover 1 year ago

Great first series. You've got a good eye for details. I'm looking forward to more installments.

BTW, to the anonymous poster -- if you're offended by D/s , maybe don't read stories marked "Nonconsent/Reluctance"? There is a lot of content on Literotica, so you should be able to find things you like. (This is why I don't allow anonymous comments on my stories. If you want to say it, you gotta sign it.)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can’t wait for the update. Loving it so far!

dmazdmazabout 1 year ago

He says 1 shmecond equals 1 second and a half. But based on later numbers that 64k shmeconds equal 12 hours, it’s the other way around - 1 seconds equals 1 shmecond and a half.

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthorabout 1 year agoAuthor

Maybe I described it backwards. I majored in English in college, not math. Lol

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I do like a swift, filthy ass fuck. This delivered the goods, that's for sure!

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthor11 months agoAuthor

@Anon: I'm glad to hear you liked this! My older work seems so unpolished, when I look back on it, but I'm glad to see that people still enjoy them!

AltissimusAltissimus10 months ago

Well written, and delightfully dirty sex.

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthor10 months agoAuthor

@Altissimus: You're too kind! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Has potential to be a fun story. I suggest you find a human editor. Just little errors that get skipped with ai editing.

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthor10 months agoAuthor

This was only my second story, and I edited it all manually. All the errors are on me. Now I have a few friends who write, and we proofread each other's work

BgDaddy33BgDaddy337 months ago

This one was so good. I think this one was my favorite from these (yes, I read them all before coming back to comment. lol)

The humor in her not liking strawberry flavoring was really well timed to the whole thing and I chuckled out loud at it.

It was dirty and very hot!

MediocreAuthorMediocreAuthor7 months agoAuthor

@BgDaddy33: You are really too kind. I'm glad that people are till enjoying the humor and spice of these stories. 😍

If you like these stories, I would definitely recommend the collab I did with Seraph_Nocturne based in this universe. Very spicy 🥵 "Published RP: Test Subjects"

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