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All Comments on 'TFAM - The Magic Touch Ch. 03'

by KniteRonin

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Really like the story so far. I would say that you write pretty well as it is.

KniteRoninKniteRonin8 months agoAuthor

Thank you for the compliment. I am just always looking for any way to improve.

1Sam20231Sam20238 months ago

Really enjoying this story. Only criticism would be the "Company Jet" thing. Pretty sure tickets aren't needed for corprate jets. Very minor thing.

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