All Comments on 'That Lovely Facial Cream'

by SubAryan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You changed your tense of writing but overall amazing concept, this was my dream when I was in India. Only could fulfill once I reached the US but man I'd love it if an Indian girl spits on me. The rawness hits way harder.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very nice beginning

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