All Comments on 'That Summer Pt. 02'

If this was more realistic it could have been a fun story. It's simply a bridge too far. Life doesn't happen like that. Sure, it's a fantasy site, but there needs to be a modicum of realism to make it believable.

Getting better all the time.

This story is amazing. Its so slow (the anticipation is where the magic is) but when it speeds up, it REALLY speeds up! The writer is doing a fantastic job. I visualize everything that is written and it keeps getting better and better. WRITE MORE!!!

***** Excellent follow-up with HOT sex!! Thanks for sharing.