All Comments on 'That Wasn't What Should Have Happen'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I was totally unprepared for this story. In most

of the stories on Lit the husband wimps out. Darrell didn't , and for this I am grateful. For once a husband ( well perhaps winterfrog and a few others but I agreed with Darells actions. He acted just like I would have. Darell was only hurt by Sally's actions, which was simply stupid and also those of her (friends?)the entire idea in toto was stupid. I think that most wives are not like these women ( just a note but I am way past that part of my life so I am not pussy whipped like a lot of writers are...either pussy or cock whipped...I have clicked on your profile and see that you have written other stories in the same vein so I can assume ( writer ) that you are either male who has been there or a woman that is forced with the opportunity to have another cock when she already has a man that loves her and will loose all that marriage has given her if she persist in her desires. I have had all kind of desires personally but most of the time I didn't have a person of the opposite sex that had similar desires and the few times that happened was ...well...well I guess I won't say but I do see what message you are putting across and I enjoy the way you do it...

zed0zed0about 14 years ago

I Love A Happy Ending! Darrel did what needed to be done, no wimps here. If Sally truly loved him, cheating would have been unthinkable. She may want to rethink her thoughts on suicide, as she is currently wasting oxygen.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Sad Story

But at least the husband handled it. How people can think lying and cheating is erotic just amazes me, when has someone stabbing you in the back been erotic. The pain and suffering is real, thanks for the story.

GenghisKhanGenghisKhanabout 14 years ago
good, short story

about how a certain kind of friendship and thinking can and do lead to tragic consequences, for those still capable of some clear-headed thinking, that is. <p>

this, obviously, is different from 98 percent of the other "loving wife" stories here where either wife or husband can just pick up any stranger, the bigger a dick it is the better, and started exchanging bodily fluids with them and there's no consequences... in fact, the spouse, normally, the husband, is gladly sitting back to watch... in fact, many stories are about the husband telling us how hard he has to work to get his wife to fuck for him to enjoy as a life porn... mostly gibberish nonsen, not stories.... <p>

so, this short one is a good and emotional one, since both husband wife SEEM to be good people, despite the wife's inexplicable behavior after some 15 good years, with two good kids. in fact, in real life, this happens quite often. and the heart aches can be devastating, too, for most involved but especially for the innocent children... <p>

some 15 years ago, in San Diego, a woman administrative at the school headquarters, did a very similar thing like this story: well respected educator, with kids and a loving husband. people weren't able to understand, to piece together, what happened for days after she was killed by her lover, at his home... that she was fucking around with another colleague; what added a big "juice" to the story was, of course, that the man who was her "lover" who killed her at his place one night after they met (and apparently she wanted to end the sexual relationship), was an African American. <p>

in another case which took place shortly after, a woman fell to her death from the 12th floor of a hotel. naked, splattered on the cement walkway below. her husband was a doctor in some conference out of state. yes, the police eventually caught the "lover".... but it's very sad, with both husbands, in these two instances, saying they thought they each had a good marriage and a good wife and mother.... very tragic, since both left some young kids behind...

OldHidekiOldHidekiabout 14 years ago
Well written

The cheating was planned, and the husband did the right thing by not trying to control his wife. A marriage is build on trust, and being forced to keep tabs on your spouse is wrong. If Darrel would have confronted Sally with the evidence his had before the affair, Sally would have been tipped off and just tried to hide her actions better. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Excellent

The character Darrel acted as a real man should, with consideration for his children and himself. He did not cry, manipulate, nor let his anger rule his actions. Sad, but realistic story about how we can be influenced by those around us. Our choice of friends, the excuses we make for their actions, and our ability to decieve ourself has led many to ruin.

hawkeye007hawkeye007about 14 years ago
Outstanding!

Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Big mistake

The Husband is a bit strange if I may say so. He loves his wife so much he will not ever take a position on something that will destroy the marriage and hurt the children. All he had to do is say no once, but he was so wimpy that he could not bring himself to do that. A very strange man.

Poizon69Poizon69about 14 years ago
Well with 'friends' like that who needs enemies?

There did seem to be a curious lack of emotion from the husband, but maybe that's how he is? The wife was very stupid and her friends even worse than stupid. But if this is a real account of what happens when a group of so-called happily marreid women get together and cuckold their husbands? I can see why the divorce rate is increasing. But overall a well written if sad story.

sexmatesexmateabout 14 years ago
Damn what a sad tale!

I hope those conniving whores get their comeuppance! Their husbands need to grow some balls!

My only question is why Darrel was so un emotional?

Sally will be changed forever and will never do this again. Maybe her tharapy will tell her why she was so easily misled by 3 whores who are good for nothing but shark bait.

So what has happened to these 3 piece of shits and their marriages and families?

So what are Sally And Darrel doing now with their lives?

Thanks for writing!

jasonnhjasonnhabout 14 years ago
Crazy thinking

I enjoyed the story because the wife got called on her idiotic behavior and held accountable. Her nasty, unloving friends even got their asses handed to them. This theme has been explored many times under Loving Wives, the wife deciding she is in charge of her marriage and forcing her behavior on her husband. I accept that there is a wide range of behaviors for people. Some husbands might enjoy the domination or just get off on multiple partners. But I think that most men would NOT be happy about the situation. Further, I accept that some men might wimp out and accept the wife's demands BUT I think that most would be VERY angry for being treated this way. I think it is very funny that these women plot the takeover of their men without consideration of real consequence. Possibly just luck that the 3 of them got away with it with their wimpy husbands. Darrel actually had a very mild response, possibly because he already knew what was happening. I think my response would have been to calmly do grab a 2x4 and pound the shit out of the other guy for having the nerve to come into my house with such an idiotic idea. Maybe after beating the shit of the guy I would be able to refrain from hurting my wife too much although, like Darrel, I would never want anything to do with her again. NO ONE is allowed to treat me with such disdain, especially in my own home. And let me tell you, I am not a violent person. Also, it is not possible for a woman to treat her husband like this and then in the next breath say she "loves" him and for it to be true. Her behavior proves that their is no real love, as Sally was told and finally realized. It amazes me that women could plot such awful behavior and think they are immune from extremely harsh consequences. Men used to assault women and we now have laws to protect against that. However, a woman's weapons are emotional, not physical. But just as devastating. Maybe we need better laws about such behavior. Gross emotion cruelty. But if there is no legal recourse things can often revert to the law of the jungle. If I am stronger, more powerful, more wealthy I get to go what I want. These women got off easy. Good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
great story

Very real and sad to think many lives and relationships end this way.

If Darrel talks about his side of things I for one will read every word

he has to say.

morefunnmorefunnabout 14 years ago
Very Well Done

Realistic is the word that comes to mind. She got talked into something she would of never considered herself. Since 15 years earlier she had been hurt terrible by a cheating spouse and ended up married to the man of the woman he ex had cheated with.

She should of remembered that. She had to know how he would react to another situation of the cheating spouse. So lets consider where the influence/temptation came from to turn her head. Her friends, with friends like that who needs enemies. If your friends do not hold basically the same life standards you hold yourself to, you should really consider if they are really your friends and care about your life as much as you would care about thiers. Or are they looking for some one to tell them it is OK so they can go on with thier own lives and feel good about themselves. One must be very careful about co-signing some else line of bullshit, especially if you know it is bullshit.

Back to the story, Dan told her to make her own decision and he wouldn't force her to make up her mind one way or the other. But to carefully respect that Dan would do what he believed was correct for him and the others in his life. She missed the fact that she may not like the outcome. He was really giving her a final chance to correct her way of thinking and ask for forgiveness for thinking such a bunch of crap. He gave her a enough rope to hang herself, with the choice of either or and damn if she didn't go ahead and jump off the scaffold on her own. She went ahead and rolled the dice and lost.

I would really like to hear his side of the story, and maybe we will if she came close to telling the truth as he understood it. I am sure he doesn't want to argue with and present a story 180 degree different than hers. Maybe he is trying to see if she is finally being honest with herself.

You can still love someone with your whole heart and long to be with them. But if there is no trust - why bother. It hurts like hell, but you get use to it. At least they can't hurt you again. After awhile you just accept it and go on.

You rebuild your life, and maybe find another person you can love and trust.

But on a sidenote. If said wife would of been mine and she walked in with a stud and gave me such a statement of declaration on her upcoming actions. When she finished and the stud smiled, lets say he would of needed extensive dental work and a good orthopedic surgeon for repair to his knees after I broke them. Nuff said. ( If I could of caught him that is )

FrederickJonesFrederickJonesabout 14 years ago
Very Good

Excellent story! Darrell's seeming unemotionalism is just the way a man would react when he was prepared for the worst and had a tight grip on his actions. Looking forward to reading his story.

Fred

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
I'm just one more to say how sad the story is

I agree also with all actions the husband took but I'm not sure, law would be behind it. neither concerning the divorce nor, or even less concerning the job. eventhough I would love to have it like that. the reaction of the husband, that she had burned down all bridges behind her for the rest of their lives is really strange. I'm not really the forgiving kind of guy but considering how everything happened and also the more than passive behaviour on his side, I don't agree with him, neither do I believe that he is able to just brush away all his bad feelings and restart like a just born baby with no memory (good or bad), after the divorce had taken place. I agree with, let her make her decisions but once I see bad influence I don't just set the trap and wait, I would not do it with my brother , sister or a good friend and for damn sure not with the woman I really love. If after confrontation she still would go on, then it would be her decision. eventhough I understand his disappointment, that she would do some thing like that.

and the last but not least I have to appologize to my granddad, although his is dead already. he asked me once what I think is most necessary in finding the right woman. I told him I like an intelligent woman I also can talk with otherwise it gets boring. I like her to be faithful and last but not least she has to be beautiful enough so I like to see her everyday. He agreed with me on those points and added in the end: the only problem you will have is this, you can have at the maximum 2 of those 3 points, now it's up to you to choose. I called him different names I'm not repeating here and did not really understand why he was talking so bad about women in general. he was married to my grandma for 64 years before he died. so I still wonder, was she ugly for him, was she dumb or unfaithful ? I never found out but so far unfortunately women prooved him right and not wrong. like in this story.

donkinkdonkinkabout 14 years ago
Really liked it!

A very nice yet sad story indeed. There's a small flaw however, in which why Darell would let his wive 'do' that in their house, while their children was sleeping upstairs??? Certainly no man would even let that happened in their own house, oh no not me, not before i pointed something to their heads!

Anyway, thank you for such a good read.

incestor007incestor007about 14 years ago
Very Fine...

I really liked the story, Darrel seems to be the very intelligent person, infact most intelligent so far i have read on any character on lit. He was proactive, patient, trusted his wife, believd in her to make right decision, but only thing i did not liked was he allowed other man to touch her in his own house, but then again, if he did not , how would he had known that she would go for it.

So many people saying here , SHE was under bad influence, so she deserve a chance, and some people says like he should have warned her about her friends bad influence. Like we do for our friends, brother or sister , we warn them not wait for them to make bad move and then react. So let me tell you the difference, If one of your Brother, Sister or friend is going to do something BAD, that is Bad for them, and they consider that you wont be affected, so they are not hurting YOU, or betraying you. So you do warn them to help them because you love them and dont want them to be hurt. But it is not the case for your spouse, you will really like to know if at some point she have to choose what she would choose, will she consider your feelings, might it even come to her mind that she can loose, would she take a chance, so now think the one who take CHANCE to lose you, do not care for you, why would you like to spend your whole life with her. Life is about Choices, you always have choices, If you think you can take chance to lose someone you love, yo need to reconsider it, or think is worth taking chance. When you brother, sister or friend go for something bad, they are not risking to lose you, but you wife is. So i think what Darrel did was very appropriate and no one can object his action, and the best thing is he did not let those so-called-friend let go scott free, no-one in real life would let these people let go. Atleast they fill think twice in futher before forcing someone.

Remember if you do something bad under influence of your friend that does not mean they are not your friend, friends do bad things, they may suggest it if they really think you will enjoy it, but FRIENDS do not force you to something bad.

She does not need therapist, all she need is think what she really want. If she was able to risk losing her husband then she really needed it, and housewife role was not her game. She may get another chance bet i really doubt it would be the same, and it would be the marriage of convenience, because she needed husband not wanted. she needed family not wanted. What she really needed was lovers. Husband will always think he is not on top in her priority list.

Good work Adrianaloves2doit, Soon you will be one the best author on lit, but recently you posted some stories where you justified cheating of wife because of he ignored her, doing something wrong does not make a story bad what makes it crap is justifying that wrong actions. Carry on with stories like this you will be on top, atleast in my list.

FireFox59FireFox59about 14 years ago
Very Good

Read but really sad that she would even consider what she did after being cheated on herself in her first marriage. I would really enjoy reading Darrel's story on gathering the evidence. Thanks.

katibkatibabout 14 years ago
Excellent

Yes, excellent on a number of counts, not the least are the writing and the editing. I, like a few others, would have expected some show of emotion from Darrell, the husband; but I am overjoyed to find a story on Literotica that shows that actions have consequences, that adultery can lead to disaster. Thanks.

peteinchicagopeteinchicagoabout 14 years ago
Very good

Great story, I have to support hubby here, the slut made her bed and can now sleep in it. She may have been influenced by her friends, but she made her own decisions. I'd like to read Darryl's story, hopefully it'll extend to him finding dating and marrying some new hotty while his ex wife is sitting alone waiting for him to come back to her.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteabout 14 years ago
Another good one from this author....

....but I think the hubby was modeled after Ward Cleaver.

GenghisKhanGenghisKhanabout 14 years ago
I don't remember

the husband saying the wife could fuck her lover in the house. <p>

I mean, what the fuck are you to say, to someone you love deeply, but someone who's brought home her lover and informs you she's going to fuck him? "Honey, why don't you take him to a hotel, as the kids are upstairs?" <p>

no, you, if you're intelligent, would act exactly as the husband in this case: just look at this woman in front of you, who's supposed your wife for 15 years, with two good kids, and tell her, coldly: <p>

"I never make you do things. You will do as you see fit. I am telling you that there will be consequences if you do this henious thing, but it is up to you to decide, as I can not make that decision for you or with you." <p>

and if she should proceed to make out in front of your, or behind you as you watch TV, and take off her clothes... well, the CONSEQUENCES would be surely come and they would not be reversable, as you said... who, a mate, would claim to love and cherish their mate and say, "If you love me, you will allow me to fuck my lover right here, and I know you will love it later, because it's going to make me a better person, a better spouse to you and parent to our kids..." <p>

how do you respond to such a Twilight Zone kind of "logic" from a person you've loved all your life? breaking her lover's teeth and risking jail time and custody of your kids, who will be left with a woman you know is CLEARLY not mentally/rationally capable, at this point, to serve as a loving and protective parent to your children? no way I am going to risk things as big as that, IN REAL LIFE. <p>

i'd rather make sure I have my two kids and my job, my decency, my humanity, and forego the teeth-knocking action... if it is not this man, she will fuck the next, and if she insists on fucking a man in front of your, she surely has no compunction about fucking people while you're not there, so what's the point of getting into a fight and risking so much more than losing a woman clearly not worthy of your love, a woman clearly not too concerned about damaging her own children pscyhologically?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
What a stupid assed story.

Honestly, it was so fucking stupid, I wanted to gouge my eyes out. Thanks for wasting my time with a completely useless plot, storyline and characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
in defence of the husband

he had his heart ALREADY broken in the past. He was more prepared emotionaly now. So , not strange at all.

Harryin VAHarryin VAabout 14 years ago
Decent story but Serious Dialogue problems

This is NOT a good story nor it is not remotely believable. While this is a Plot is decent the dialogue here is just too amazing to be believed... and much of it makes NO sense of all.

The KEY point here is that both of them had come out of previous marriages and both Darrel and Sally experience the pain and suffering of catching a cheating spouse .

Thus the comment/ idea made by bsome about Darrel being somewhat cold and unemotional shows those persons/ readers are Obtuse.

In addition ... a violent reaction by Darrel would end up placing him in greater jeopardy (Jail) and the kids with the mentally deranged wife.

However the dialog is hard to accept. For example Sally's friend Valerie is now going on and on about how wonderful it is to have a 2nd man to fuck she says this

......Valerie sat up straight in her chair and said, "Absolutely not! After all, he's my husband and is supposed to be faithful to me until the day he dies. I'd never allow him to fuck someone else."....

That sort of idiotic comment would always draw a reaction from 99.999999% of all humans. ***** But especially from the way Sally as a

Character is developed **** . She is so straight laced -- she doesnt know what fellatio is for christ's sake!!-- that there's no way she could let that sort of any comment from Valerie unchallenged .

Then one her friends ask her to go ahead and try it-- bringing home another man to fuck -- she says this

"I suppose so, so what time and where should I meet You and Drew next Friday to get it going?"

this is just awful dialogue and not the least it believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Well thought out and written story

This story is different from others of a comparable theme. The wife actually asked the husband if it is okay if she has an affair with another man. The story is only believable in the extreme by which I mean that there may be instances in which wives meet and they have an agreement of sorts in which each has a lover. But it's surely a rare occurrence. I take it that there is no continuation to this story - which certainly could have a "next chapter" which itself could go in several directions. The authors has done a good job in writing an understandable, straight forward story that makes readers think beyond this story itself. RAG

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
A lot of folks said this is a sad tale,

and it truly is. Darrel is a liar, and Sally is stupid AND a liar. They should be glad to be rid of each other, but they profess love. True, if Sally really loved Darrel, she wouldn't have transgressed so. On the other hand, if Darrel loved Sally, he would have tried something to save his marriage. To me, Darrel is the loser here. Looks like Darrel likes the power trip. He got to tell her to leave and to threaten her if she contested the divorce. That's not what a strong man who loves his wife would do. The children are the ones who lost most. They have a piss poor set of parents. Rich

bruce22bruce22about 14 years ago
Interesting and well-written story

The basic idea of a confrontation without violence with one of the partner thinking they had won through to their goal and then discoverting they have come up with zilch is fascinating. The fact that three of her girlfriends had pulled off the maneuver with success is as unlikely as the return of Babe Ruth to baseball......

The dialogue could be improved but overall the story moved well.

My thanks to the author.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
He did try something.

For those who question why Darrel didn't try to do anything to save his marriage, I would suggest that he did. He tried trusting his wife; trusting her to come to her senses, trusting her to remember her wedding vows. We're not talking about some guy trying to seduce his wife, we're talking about his wife getting the idea she deserves to have a lover. If you have to convince your wife not to take a lover, how much of a marriage have you really got?

kobbiekobbieabout 14 years ago
...never thought I would say this but...

If you read any of my responses...I never root for the cheating wife. I think I feel differently about this one. Not because I dislike Darrell but rather... I hate to see people give up. I think they are both giving up on each other. True what she did was bullshit, but she did buckle under constant badgering from idiot friends. I think, if she was willing to quit her job, move, and never talk to those tramps again I would try to salvage 15 years of marriage. It might not work, but at least some effort with quite a bit of communication went into it...

BigJohn601BigJohn601over 13 years ago
Well, her friends may have shared the recipe but she cooked her own goose......

The only peope who deserve the right to be pityed is the husband and children, the others made their beds and should enjoy sleeping in them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
The Pain never ends

I read wiht great sorrow the story. My own 22 years of marriage ended in a similar manner. It took almost a year to gert it over with and through the courts. Her choices were not only stupid , but fatal. I tried to grieve after the hospital called me to tell me she had died. However, the hate for her actions was so great, I was not able to do that .

I have to date brought some retribution to some of the people that were involved and resposible , but then nothing will ever put my pain to rest , and there will never be any healing . I hope that you will write and try and move past this, as it is way to late for me.

The remainder of my life will cobntinue to be spent brining those people to task for destroying my marriage,my wife, my love and my world.

huedogghuedoggalmost 13 years ago
Anon sorry for your loss

but it's just not the fact that they have stupid slutty friends. Their friends have these fucked up husbands that want them to fuck other men and get off on it. What kind of man wants to be cuckolded? You think so little of yourself that you go find a man to fuck you wife, or let her tell you she taking a lover. I would have booted the bitch out the minute she said that shit.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
THE GOLDEN RULE

doesnt apply to the 3 "R"s. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What kind of man wants to be cuckoded?

Some men get cucked and develop a taste for it, often expressed as a love for Matt Moreau stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What kind of man wants to be cuckoded?

Some men get cucked and develop a taste for it, often expressed as a love for Matt Moreau stories

Danger09Danger09almost 12 years ago
I love this story

I've read this story numerous time; partly because I can't believe a man would actually allow, encourage , watch & participate in his wife fucking other men... Further more I can't believe the wife in this story! She was already divorced after her & her now husband caught their spouses fucking & instead of her having the understanding thats a no no she goes & listen to her slut friends & their perverted disgusting husbands about bringing a another man home & trying to force her husband the father of her kids to watch her have sex with another man ! No one is this stupid.. Why fuck up a good / perfect marriage over what a bunch of gutter sluts say?! As a woman; the husbands in this story that actually was hiding in the fucking closet Watching his wife getting fucked by another man is sick! I don't feel sorry for the slut in training, she got exactly what she deserved... I hate when she told her husband if you love me like you say you you'll let me do this.... WTF?! She made it seem as if her life depended on bringing this stranger into her home where her. Children are asleep to fuck him... Yeah I bet she regretted her actions but too little to late obviously her wanting to listen to a bunch of sluts was more important than her own family... What a stupid bitch she was

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Interesting but certainly sad tale

Again the author wishes that we believe these are in fact real people who lived the story as related. Overall it is a story of numerous stupid decisions fueled by lust by the heorine (in this case it has the air of a Graecian Tragedy and her tragic flaw was listening to her friends without a critical mind(. She ended as a broken woman having single handedly destroyed a marriage, family and her husband's love/ What was the prize worthy of such destruction it seems to be an orgasm or two with a strange cock.

It is my feeling that one side weighed against the other tips drastically in favor of her previous personal life of 10 plus years.

C_frommnC_frommnover 11 years ago
So Where is Darrells Side

You said Darrell would tell his side.

user110user110over 11 years ago
this isnt a true story, so quit lyin'

if darrel thought drew was was going to stick

his SYRINGE into sally's ARM for a HEROIN injection INSTEAD of going to stick

his COCK into sally's PUSSY for a SEMEN injection, would darrel have still refused to intervene and tell sally that same stupid "I've never tried to run your life" sermon? would he have still thrown her out? got her fired?

if sally was his 17 y.o. daughter instead of his wife, would he have behaved like that to her?

"What I will do, however, is tell you my reaction to your decisions," is a lie, BTW - he never did tell her. he also lied about forgiving her.

anyway, darrel didnt love sally and was just looking for a way out of the marriage. he expended exatly 0 calories in his efforts to save the union. 100% of his acts were made in a spiteful effort to insure sally was left homeless, penniless, and alone.

sally was a stupid cunt for signing the divorce papers after reading the letter. he ADMITTED that he already made "the evidence" public with the lawsuits, the distribution of multiple copies of the "evidence", and telling her boss and her family "all about it". she would have got the house, full custody of the kids, 50% of his assets and at least 50% of his income in child support and alimony... if she was only smart enough to realize darrel had already carried out the threat he was using to extort her with, and made all these preparations PRIOR to her unforgivable coupling.

poor retarded sally!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Implausible story

And the "It's a true story told to you by a friend" makes it seem even more ridiculous. Unless Sally is a drug addict, alcoholic or serial killer she is going to get custody, no matter the adultery. (Even in states that accept adultery as grounds for divorce, she still gets custody). That's how the Court system in this country rolls. And unless she works for a Private School, she will retain her job because firing her would break a ton of laws. And she's going to get half of his retirement. This story is a total misrepresentation of the facts. Given that it's a fictional story you get some latitude, but even fiction needs to have some basis in truth to be believable. Nothing in this story comes close to being believable. So don't bother to write Darrel's side of it. It would come out worse than this sorry excuse for a story.

javmor79javmor79over 10 years ago
Great story, but there's no way this is real

While I do agree that the wife's actions would have warranted divorce, I would have liked the husband to step in and at least give her a warning that she was traveling a very dangerous road. I do understand that he isn't the kind of man to control his wife, he was aware of her destructive friends and their "advice". He could have at least told her his feelings about them. Especially when he saw that their advice was affecting her. Although this is what I would have rather seen, I do understand his actions. Some people would rather try to fight for the 15 years, some people would rather sit back and make sure that they can trust the person. Either way, he is not the one at fault here. She should have been smarter and valued her husband more. He should not have had to do either of these things.

I liked the story, but I have to agree with the others here. I don't think that this story is based on reality. I really can't see that there would be four married wives getting together to discuss a 75% success rate at cuckolding their husbands. Although I do believe there are guys who would actually get off on it, I can't believe that it is that common that of 4 friends, three of them have successfully cuckolded their husbands. I am big on forgiveness, but if my wife even hinted that this is a path that she wanted to take, I would not just lower my head and go with it. What is marriage coming to?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
A good story

And while it isn't very believable for real life, I know what a bad influence friends can be, or attempt to be.

A woman works in my wife's classroom that is a serial cheater. After being cheated on by her first and second husbands, she married a third for security, not love. She started telling my wife how much fun she was having screwing just about everything that had a hard dick and let it be known, her husband was aware of it but accepted it.

I don't believe she was prepared for my wife to call HER a cheater, no different than her ex husbands who had cheated on her. Now, years later after her third husband died, she still finds as much dick as she can and seldom speaks of it to my wife, she understands how strongly my wife feels about cheaters. My wife was cheated on by a boyfriend back in high school and her feeling have become stronger against cheaters over the years.

sugnasugnaabout 10 years ago
Risk Taking

Cheating is most often about everything else other than sex. It is about risk taking, it is about inflating your ego, it is about the sense of power at having your cake and eating it too, it is about shitting on your spouse, it is about destroying a relationship that you want to get out of but are too much of a coward to approach honestly. Sex is sex, getting off, having an orgasm is just a bodily function unless you mix it with an emotional component. What kind of emotional component you add to the mix defines what kind of person you are. What you are willing to do or not do, is who you are. It is called cheating because it is a secretive, unethical behavior. When you cheat a person that you have sworn your love and allegiance to forever, you define yourself as a wholly untrustworthy person. If your spouse can't trust you, who can? Once a person has flown this flag, it cannot be taken down. They have shown that they are capable of betrayal and that it is part of who they are. No, friends cannot have this much influence unless the trait already exists. If their are children involved, cheating extends past the spouse to the children as well. No, parents do not marry their children, but they do make a promise with their love to take care of them and nurture them and do their best to protect them. Cheating on your family is far from doing your "best".

SplitAcesSplitAcesover 9 years ago
What a load of crap

Darrel (yeah, the character) is a typical left wing liberal piece of silly putty do-gooder who knew all about this at its inception and could have easily nipped it in the bud, preventing the destruction of his marriage. Instead, he rejects his responsibility to protect his wife and marriage; proclaiming his noble principles won't allow him to control his wife; thereby leaving her to be controlled by the evil influences in her life instead. I must suspect ulterior motives. He obviously wanted out of his marriage enough to throw his wife under the bus.

RKreaderRKreaderover 9 years ago
was he tired of her?

I'm guessing that Darrel didn't much love his wife before the incident.

He could easily have said to her, right after the kitchen meeting, "I've heard a rumor that one of your friends has a lover, and her husband is too much of a wimp to object. I know you'd never do that, but if you did I'd probably kill him and divorce you! I love you and I'm glad we're faithful to each other"

But then, there wouldn't have been much of a story!

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
selfish is

as selfish does.

Darrel should be made aware of what happens to men who mess with married women.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
and then

with all the other husbands,

pay a visit to Drew, Robert, and Barry.

phil2213phil2213over 9 years ago
The story was pointless.

How could there be so little communication in this relationship prior to the separation? It just seemed completely and totally implausible almost cartoonish. Additionally, there was little to zero emotion. The characters were eerily cardboard replicas. I have never met persons that are characterized in this story. Thank you for your effort.

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
AT THE END SHE ADMITTED

and accepted the consequences. TK U MLJ LV NV

sdc97230sdc97230almost 9 years ago
Don't need to know hos Darrel knew

But would be interested in how those lawsuits worked out.

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsover 8 years ago
too implausible

The two of them met when they were both going through nasty divorces due to their spouses cheating on them.

Their friendship grew from supporting each other through this pain.

So suddenly she thinks it is a brilliant idea to turn a man who divorced his first wife for cheating into a cuckold?

She really believes that will end well?

Maybe it is a true story.

Unlike real life fiction has to make sense, and that doesn't.

sbrooks103sbrooks103over 8 years ago
Thoughts

Why do these women who can’t even CONSIDER their husbands having lovers, believe that not only is it their right to have lovers, but that their husbands have to know and accept it?!

“but I was imagining Ted just fucking me raw.” – Did it ever occur to you to ask DARREL to fuck you raw?

As others have said, she met Darrel when they were both going through divorces from cheating spouses. How in the world can she even THINK of cheating on Darrel or think that he would accept her having lovers?

“ask Darrel if he truly loves you and wants to see you happy!" – First, if SHE really loves HIM she wouldn’t do this, and second, if she really loves him she would let him have a lover, too!

“I thought you'd want me to be happy!" – Yes, he wanted you to be happy with HIM!

christmas_apechristmas_apeover 8 years ago
sexcellent.

i really enjoyed this. thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Thougts on her letter

If her husband was her "one and only love forever" why did she listen to the other three sluts and go whoring around?

She must have had a good idea of his reaction to the idea, and the notion that he would "eventualy come round", is frankly certifiable unless he was a total wimp, which at no point was intimated.

So another stupid slut bites the dust along with her whore friends. Good riddance.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Interesting but flawed story

While I could hope that the story ended like you wrote it I think the reality (if there can be a reality for a fictional story) would have been Sally retaining a lawyer and going after half of everything, including his retirement. The evidence he had was obtained illegally and not valid in a Court of law. She would have gotten the house, custody of the kids, alimony (more alimony since she lost her job), child support and half their investments. To think anything else is to admit ignorance to the laws in this Country that are so heavy set in favor of the woman. Nice try, but totally implausible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Stupid cunt

With stupid cunt friends

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Asshole of Lit calling others

stupid is like a fag calling annony a queer. This old ugly, fat, lonely, fag , annony needs to be put in a home for asshole. he'd be their leader. 5 for effort and story!!

dyonysosdyonysosabout 8 years ago
2 stars

I know it's just a story but it's so far out of reality it becomes a joke,no woman i know would be so absolutly stupid to try and pass this to her husband,doing it in front of him and in theyr home is beyond stupid

I gave it 2 stars just for the use of your typewriter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
There is another way to solve this

There are so many that subscribe to the notion that sally the slut would get a lawyer and take him to the proverbial cleaners.

How about if he kept his mouth shut and just paid for some anonymous person to shoot the bitch, Then a few months later arrange for accidents to happen to each of her slut friends. Maybe not lethal but certainly life changing.

Just a thought.

BTW the tree huggers need not apply with answers!!!

tazz317tazz317almost 8 years ago
EDUCATED PEOPLE SHOULD REALIZE

about actions and re-actions and consequences, TK U MLJ LV NV

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 8 years ago
Re-Reading

What sort of a wimpy cuck is Mario? He CRIES when she TELLS him she's going to fuck Robert, OFFERS his bed when she was willing to use the guest bed, then watches and eats the cream pie?! Any man with HALF a ball goes over to Robert, punches him in the face and/or kicks him in the balls and throws his ass out! Then he turns to Maria and tells her to 1) forget this ridiculous idea and 2) she is FORBIDDEN to go on any more of these Girls Nights Out or she can leave with Robert and NOT come back!

"Absolutely not! After all, he's my husband and is supposed to be faithful to me until the day he dies. I'd never allow him to fuck someone else." - So explain to me, where in that statement is the corollary, that YOU are his WIFE and are supposed to be faithful to HIM until the day YOU die? And YOU aren't allowed to fuck someone else?!

Andy is another one who should be castrated since he obviously isn't using his balls, I don't care if Lilly IS giving him her ass!

"Sally, it's a no-lose situation for you. You get to keep your husband and have tons of extra sex too!" - Why are they so sure that Darrell will react like the others? Just because it seems that all their friends husbands are cucks doesn't mean that Darrell is! Again, Darrell divorced his first wife for cheating, what has she seen that makes her think that his attitude has changed?

As I said in my earlier comment, what are these sluts thinking (term used loosely!) that they believe that THEY can have lovers with or without their husbands consent, but it is INCONCEIVABLE that the same "courtesy" be extended to their husbands?

"If you don't want to confront Darrel with it before you are sure it's something you

want to pursue, you could always sneak off one evening when we all go out to try Ted out." - In other words, cheat!

"all three of us are realizing that it's one of the best things we've ever done to enhance our marriages." - Enhance YOUR marriages, but how about your husbands" marriages?

Is she Sally or Sandy?

"he'd come around when he saw how happy this would make me." - Yeah, just like YOU would come around if you saw how happy some hot chick made Darrel, right?

"No doubt it's what we all deserve" - A little belated realization there, I thought the DESERVED to have lovers AND marriages.

One thing that I will never understand is why these sluts, no matter HOW happy they may be (assuming they really are as happy as they claim), feel the need to drag other wives into it, beyond simply describing their life-style, unless of course they AREN'T as happy as the claim, and as they say, misery loves company!

SampkyangSampkyangover 7 years ago
WOW what a stupid woman

I think she should reconsider suicide...hey one less idiot

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Dear 'interesting but flawed story'

Read the story again. He said that his evidence came from their home security system that she knew about. This information is absolutely 100% admisable in any court. Just like if he had a video of someone breaking into his home. Other than that he probably talked to Ted to find out what she was up to. Other than that he might have placed a recorder in her purse or recorded her phone conversations but he never said he was going to use any other information he collected.

MbgdallasMbgdallasover 7 years ago
Why are men so stupid and weak.

What a weak husband. He never lifted a finger to help his wife. This problem is on him.

Anyone who knows this is about to happen. The influence his wife is under. The miscalculation she has made. And does nothing is a piss poor weak ass man and a terrible husband and deserves what he got. I hop e he rots in hell for breaking up his family.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
If It Were Me

I would contract someone to throw acid in her face. She is nothing but a lying cheating whore and deserves nothing but pain and humiliation. And would shoot her boyfriend in the bollocks and her whore friends to.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
And this is why I would never get married

Most women have the slut gene. I've seen it in my own family. Tell them they are beautiful and in five minutes they spread their legs.

Why on earth would I want to support someones daughter when I can have the cream without buying the cow.

No, simple lie detector test. How do you know a woman is lying, answer because she moves her lips.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Stupid

Sally an intelligent woman stupidly listened to those three sluts she should have stuck with her common sense. Told Darrel what they had suggested and told him that she would be as true and faithful to him as he was to her. Then dropped her so called friends, but I'm afraid she succumbed to the ideas and got what she deserved.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Karma

When a wife plots to cheat on her husband and cuckold him, she has also made the decision to destroy her marriage, her family, and her future. The decisions you make today determines the events of your tomorrows. Consequences can be a bitch. Learn to live with them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
1*

another cocksucking wimp posting dumb cuck SHIT.

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 7 years ago
Again,

you have a seriously f'ed up circle of friends.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Dear Darrell I fucked up, but you're about to get fucked.

Sally got custody of the kids. Sally got the house. Sally got alimony and child support. Sally got half of Darrell's retirement. Because the Courts don't care about infidelity. They don't care about anything that doesn't concern the kids. They want what is best for the kids and what is best is for the kids to stay in the house with Mommy. If you think otherwise - you're delusional. This was a nice fairy tale but it never would have happened this way in a million years. Stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
The Darell got with the programme.

The courts always fuck over the husband however much of a cheating whore the wife is.

So instead of paying the slut he paid a contractor to have the whore and her friends killed.

Job done! No alimony

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
17/04/17 Anonymous is an idiot

When she brought her lover to her house with the kids present in the house and had sex with him, she screwed her legal rights for her kids! The kids were emotionally affected by this so the court will consider her an unfit mother!

widowedidiotwidowedidiotover 6 years ago
Betrayal?

Well at least this girl did think about what she was going to do before acting on it. But yet again, even though this guy was her friends lover, to her he was a total stranger, and yet she opts to give up fifteen years of married life for him? One point of contention I have is that being a cheat does not make a woman an unfit mother, She had arranged for kids to be at her babysitters. exposing her kids to her lover was all on the husband since he knew what was going down that day, and she had the proof in the letter he gave her. in a divorce she would have gotten not only the kids but also the house and lots more. The hubby didn't have a leg to stand on since it was him that went and picked up the kids and decided to expose them to their moms tyrst. another thing is all the men in your stories so far, never say anything to their wive's, it's her life, and her decisions to make. Wrong!! it's their life's and their decisions. If a man can't be honest with his wife and express his feelings to her. then he has no buisness being married and raising children. over all I liked your stories and your concepts. Thank you for sharing, and I hope you keep on writing. Just try to give this wife's a little bit more credit. after all they're supposed to be educated and not some dummys.

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
GOSSIP TALK SHOULD NEVER BE CONFUSED WITH REALITY

where-as the thoughts might be delicious, the actions are dire, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
one thing

It's nice to see a story where there isn't salt throwing on both sides. Letters make it simple to be less irrational. Well, sort of...i guess comment sections don't count. But she accepts the consequences although at the same time doesn't move on. Well, no indication, which itself is an indication she'll die alone and regretful. Considering how trusting and willing to accept pain she is, I wonder if she would have been happier as a submissive.

darthdaxdarthdaxabout 6 years ago
Shot too Hell!!!

You know when ever I'm having a really great day, one where everything is going my way and i feel on top of the world. I just pull up this story and read it and my day and mood is totally fucking ruined and I'm back in a shitty ass mood again!!! Dumb Bitch!!! Jeeez, poster child for birth control!!

notredame43notredame43about 6 years ago
i hope the author is no longer friends with this cunt

If this is true,this female deserves to be shunned by the children and ex husband for the rest of her existence. No excuse for her shit, shes a sekfish deluded cunt. She refrains from taking suicide since it would hurt her kids. No more than what shes already done. Id encourage her to do so as shes a vile piece of filth and cannot have a beneficial effect on their lives by living.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sally was selfish

She didn't offer Darrel the opportunity to eat Drew's cum out of her. That's why he reacted so badly. If you take a lover, you have to give the husband the opportunity to participate the first time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
True story my foot

Well I read the BS on the first page only and since it is cuckold garbage I stopped. But the idea that women would wantonly talk like that is only applicable for those with IQ below 60.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Story doesnot t work

Okay nobody's is that dumb. And throws ng her out of her home is no way legal or douable. So much for this weak story line

widowedidiotwidowedidiotover 5 years ago
Wife betrayed?

I have to agree with a lot of this commenters in that this story is to stupid to be belivable. I think this was really set up by the husband trying to find a way out of their marriage, First of all with his principals. What he's saying is that if his wife or child is fixing to pick up a hot plate with bare hands he's not going to warn them that it's hot because its their decision to make? Same thing apply to when her friends went over to her house. Why didn't he warn her of his knowledge of their conversation? Any husband would tell his wife "if you do that. I'm going to do this." But he didn't. Another thing that gets me is the recordings and photos. Since the girls were going to different restaraunts, Did he have all the places they went to bugged for audio and video? And the alarm systems. It will ping your phone when someboby approaches your door, but once you punch your numbers in it automatically turns off except the front door. you can record on command, but it also goes to your wife's phone to let het know that the recorders have been activated. So how could she forget the house had alarms if those recorders are in each corner of every room on the first floor? And you also have the modem that lets you know who's at your front door before you open it. Cheating doesn't make you an unfit mother. to take a womans children away from her it would have to be proven that she's an unfit mother. after all the evidence he presented to her, she could have used it to prove he was an unfit father for bringing the kids home, when he knew already what was going down. All this just doesn't make sense. If you really love a person. You don't let them stick their hand in the fire without warning them. To dumb to be belivable. and I hope he doesn't try to tell his side as this one has it all. I don't think there's anything left to say unless there's a reconcilliation down the line where he could say what changed his mind.

meganann10meganann10over 5 years ago

To me the husband is the biggest wimp ever he knew what was going on but refused to confront the situation if he truly loved her he would have fought for her before it got to far it is as much or more his fault for the divorce I have no use for a wimp like that, I'm not saying she wasn't wrong she was but he knew what was going on and didn't give her a chance to stop pathetic

CumminginsiderherCumminginsiderherover 5 years ago
If the husband knew ahead of time, he also must have known.....

How wishy-washy she was in the first place about doing it.

How her "friends" poisoned her mind and pushed her into it. Yes, she was the one that actually brought the guy home but the husband is NOT innocent in this.

He essentially facilitated the event by not at least trying to reach out to the wife while she was obviously struggling mentally. He simply bailed on her.

It makes me think the hubby didn't really want to be married anymore. A REAL husband would have at least "fought" a little bit to try and save his marriage. He didn't, he just wanted to play the victim. He is no different than any other Beta Cuckold.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Another

Another really dumb cheating wife story. Makes you.not.want your wife to have friends. Why didn't he kick Crew's teeth in on his way out?

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 5 years ago
WOW comments

Myself first USMC Vietnam 2 tours 18 years education retired

Liked story 4 stars

She had many opportunities to discuss with him As he said all was discussed with her first

She chose girlfriends? bullshit over discussion with him he gave her chance even at last

Good more please

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 5 years ago
Reading, Again

"to see if we wanted to step into a little fling to bring some extra spice to our marriages." - Hmm, interesting that it's okay for TED to have a fling to bring spice to his marriage, but not Darrell? And why WOULD Ted agree to not tell? I realize the he doesn't know Darrell, but if his wife tried to seduce Darrell, wouldn't he want Darrell to tell him?

"Honey, you've always told me that my happiness was foremost in your life, right?" - As HIS happiness should be foremost in YOUR life, and you MUST know this will NOT make him happy anymore than his fucking another woman would make you happy!

"I misjudged what you'd want." - No, no misjudgment, you just decided that he should want what you want.

They're worried about being cut off from their lovers? That should be the :LEAST of their problems!

He wouldn't have said no, if she asked? Saying no to a request, even an obscene one isn't controlling her life!

"I tried to imagine how I'd feel if the situation were reversed. My mind wouldn't even let me go there...I was too certain that he'd never do to me what I'd done to him." - Too bad she didn't think of that before, of course, then we wouldn't have the story!

fritz51fritz51almost 5 years ago
Good story.

I enjoyed it, and thought it was well written, so I scored it accordingly.

My comment concerns the response of the husband when she first brings the spare cock home. By the end, it has been revealed that the husband knew what was coming, but not when.

When she comes through the door and informs the husband that she is going to fuck this guy - if I were the husband, that would be game, set, and match. No other choice, no other thinking needed, BTB.

Just her disrespecting her husband in this manner is enough to boot her sorry ass out, even before any sex actually occurred, she crossed the uncross-able line when she decided to do the screwing, with no advance discussion with her mate.

Maybe if a wife was being egged on by whore friends, and had gone to meet a man, but changed her mind and "saw the light" prior to cheating, she could be forgiven. Provided she accepted blame, begged for forgiveness and be willing to allow unrestricted monitoring to ensure compliance. Even then, a husband would have to watch her like a fox.

But these women described in so many of these stories, including a couple written by me are so self absorbed that they willing to do heinous acts that they know will inflict terrible pain, then act surprised when the husband reacts negatively.

These creatures are not worthy of mercy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
True story?

Absolutely not. Just too many coincidences for this to be real.

Three friends who just happen to have cuckold husbands? Riiight. If they had met through some fetish community, it could be true. But not like this. There just aren't enough closeted cucks in the world for that to be believable. And especially not when they also happen to be ready to come out of that closet at roughly the same time. It would be more likely for the author to win a trip to the moon, and the grand lottery prize twice, all in the same week.

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Ok

Wife being home another man , never mind the kids, she would be gone and Drew would have had a serious attitude adjustment immediately. Beware the wrong kind of friends. Good story.

WargamerWargameralmost 4 years ago

Suicide is on the cards. Her life is over

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 4 years ago

Heh, I was going to comment, saw I had already made it a year ago: If husbands aren't allowed to "play," how do they explain Ted? He's married, isn't he supposed to be faithful until he dies?

As has been said, he left his first wife for cheating - even if she didn't consider this TECHNICALLY cheating, it was certainly close enough that it should have give her pause.

I would have like to see her talk to the husbands, see if the sluts stories were true.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 3 years ago
What frustrates me with this story...

...is that it was the last story the author contributed. It was a good story and I'm betting there is a part 2 that begs to be written. Too bad. It's been a decade now and I don't expect the sequel to come along.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Again. Another story of a loving wife turned into a cheating whore by slurry friends. Great story of consequences.

Dlh143Dlh143over 3 years ago

Come on! What about what happens to her slutty friends?

iameaseliameaselabout 3 years ago

Sadly when the women are portrayed as being this stupid " Do you let Howard have other women too?"

Valerie sat up straight in her chair and said, "Absolutely not! After all, he's my husband and is supposed to be faithful to me until the day he dies. I'd never allow him to fuck someone else." I finish the story at that point.

secretsalsecretsalabout 3 years ago

It's entertaining enough, if you take a heavy dose of suspension of disbelief. Main problem is the women being ditzy 2d characters. To go from delusional positions at first ("No way do these cuckold husbands get to have the same extramarital privileges as we do!") straight to accurate self-assessment when Darrell has them cornered ("We deserve all this for being terrible people.") is too far a leap to sit well. Just comes off as characters going through the motions and reading their lines dispassionately.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I like this author...we got to see what the wife went through when she got caught......

des67des67almost 3 years ago

Interesting story, but its unfinished work... 3 friends contributed storyline? .... 3 STARS.... Added as a favorite,.....

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