All Comments on 'That's the Spirit'

A nice twist of mystery. Will there be a second part? No, I don't think it needs any more.

You put this in Romance? Next time warn readers with a description of Bondage, Nonconsent, etc. Not everyone is into that crap.

What utter rubbish, FFS, if I read that's the spirit one more time I was going to scream, and also why the fuck are they trying for a baby after only having one date a week for 5 months? So here I am going to follow the link to your story and give it the 1* it probably deserves too.

English as a Second Language ? Or just shitty editing ?

Why the Hell you posted this one in Romance.And Even though you should've warned about Bondage and Nonconsent. WTF completely ruined on the second page.

Supposed to have been a romance not rape and bondage.

My apologies for having put this story in Romance. I did not understand the acceptable parameters of the Romance rubric, and I naively thought this was a romance story, even if Melissa's back story is not at all pretty. I am sorry and I will try hard not to make such a mistake again. JBE

This is the second and last story by jbedwards I will read.... how does she come up with all of the submissive male idiots?

More garbage

If I saw a guy treat his wife or girlfriend like that by forcing to do things in public, I would call the police then beat the shit out of him.