All Comments on 'That's What Friends Are For Pt. 04'

by Dirk1234

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"after he had literally fucked her brains out the night before" Unless her brains were poking out of her ears, he did not literally fuck her brains out.

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Watch for sentences that you're inappropriately ending with question marks.

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Blech, we're back to the dom/sub trash. Is it really so difficult for these characters to be turned on by their ability to turn each other on (which is clear they are able to do) without having to rely on stupid mind games? I was looking forward to this chapter, but I couldn't even make it to the end of the only page this chapter has. There's no reason parts three and four should be separate chapters.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is so hot! Love it!

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