All Comments on 'The Abduction Game Ch. 01'

Always enjoy your over the top stories. Looking forward to the next chapter of Margie's adventure!

Yes. Nice to have you back Tim Smith and am anxiously waiting for the next installment of this lovely story. You make it hurt so good in all ways. Thanks.

you had me breathlessly waiting for what was going to happen next. can,t wait to rwad what happens next to Margie. Hurts so good.

I am sure I couldn't deal with what the husband is dealing with.

We now know you have a "wife of 14 years". That was repeated so often that it makes your story barely average.

what a bunch of sickos, your fan club from prison all like it.

I am very impressed with story. It is extremely well written, with a nice pace. The reader really feels the tension and the utter base sexuality. Terrific and very believable set up, which added great drama to this first segment. Thank you Mr. Smith.

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Part ii will end with the wife deciding to leaving him for the master.

What a lame depressing wimp story.

Great Start. Always been a fan of your stories

It has been too long. Love your stories. Do not let us wait so long for the sequel.

So we now a wimp husband who for all intents and purposes is nothing more then a paycheck and a taxi. A slut who has been bopping every cock in 3 states. A set of very clever predators going after stupid idiots.

After this they will own her and rent out her cunt and ass hole. Hubby might as well not exist, she will have no use for him. Even if she wanted him his little 2" (all white husbands have less then 3" dicks) will never fit any hole on her.

please tell me there s going to be ch 2 and how long it will take to appear on here

really liked you story indecent proposal and was waiting for a follow up chapter to that one also

Excellent as always.

I was ecstatic to see your return! I'm champing at the bit for the next chapter!!

Glad to see you back again. Always enjoyed your tales and can not wait for the next chapter.

Pay no attention to the haters. Your stories never fail to arouse. Can't wait for the next part of this one.

Also, would love to see you continue "Used". That one always seemed like it had another chapter or two left.

Tim, a lot of people love your stories including me. My only single complaint is the follow up chapters never appear. please don't leave us hangin.

waited 2 months now for chapter 2 still nothing dont leave this story like all the others unfinished i dont beleive im on my own here there are also alot of people anxiously awaiting chapter 2 so please dont keep us hanging on please leave a post on here letting us no there is a chapter 2 and when it will get posted on here i and we are waiting

also waiting for Part 2. Great story.

we do need closure. I admit that I would have started talking about a divorce settlement after she gave me her fantasy. Do not for get poor Tom!

So when are we going to see the next chapter of this one?

great story - been waiting and searching for part 2

Please submit next chapter......

would love to see if she's comeing home at all

When is the second part going to be released .

Swedish, isn't it?

PLEASE DONT BE TOO LONG WITH THE SECOND PART

When will part two come?

So when is the second part coming out ?

Love all of your writing! Can't wait for Chapter Two!

CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS

This is such a good story. It's a shame it seems to have end here.

Helen UK.

I sure wish there was another chapter to the story. I've noticed that some authors here have started releasing their long stories on kindle. Does anyone know if this author is on Amazon and what name the author uses there?

The story flowed well but needs to be finished.

u fucker why label a story with chapter no.s if u don't post further for years

We’re lucky, he didn’t finish this mess.