All Comments on 'The Abduction of Debbie Pt. 01'

by martinbobb

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LostnFoundBinLostnFoundBinover 3 years ago
Good Start

This feels very much like the consensual version of Rocket1010's 'Awakening of Crystal'. There is clearly enough of a difference to define it as a separate and original story but there is a strikingly similar theme, premise, cast of characters, and delivery. I look forward to how this finishes up for the couple undergoing their therapy program.

QuadeQuadeover 3 years ago

So it's part one, but I have to read the other's first?

If that's how much sense your writing makes, I'll pass.

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