All Comments on 'The Abuse of Sally'

A somewhat erotic taste of fulfillment for the wife, knowing she was safe with her husband present during her "rape" as they spontaneously took advantage of an unexpected situation--at the wife's request.

Not a scenario I would want for my wife in real life to fulfill one of her fantasies, but I guess the "disgust" aspect threw in a different psychological aspect for that sector of readers who get off on abusing submissive women.

The composition was decent, the plot (such as it was) flowed well from point to point, and the main players' remained "in character" consistently from beginning to end.

The story is a testament to a stable marital relationship in which communication has bonded a husband and wife successfully in accepting each other "as they are".

Thanks for sharing your creative imagination. Keep writing.

MLJ