All Comments on 'The Ad'

Who are these people? Who cares? 1*

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You tried.

He is just an old fat ugly fag fool who sucks and swallows!!

I get a kick out of fucktards like hindsight and impo that criticize people's work when they haven't written any stories themselves. Piece of shit hypocrites.

Everyone is welcome to their opinions and to comment on any story they wish. I have absolutely learned from constructive criticism. The less than constructive comments are fine too, if that's the best way you can express yourself. I do ask that you all refrain from name calling and insults. Please. Hate my story but please be above insulting other readers.

does not carry over into personal lifes, TK U MLJ LV NV

and thus started the AIDS epidemic...

this is stream of consciousness? the story idea is good, perhaps written hastily? the one comment about AIDS would have been resolved with rubber(s) .... but perhaps the interloper was not a stranger (in reality)... good plot, good thinking, perhaps more thought? please stay in saddle

Please, try something more original next time. Your tiring same comments just aren't amusing anymore. I can see why you prefer these willing cuckold tales, they mirror your own life. Have you been out in the neighborhood today to get your cream pies to take home to hubby? The gift you give could be permanent. Have a great day Bonnie.

do NOT make a story. They make a porno script. If that's what you're after, you succeeded.

If you were trying to tell a story, you failed.

From the point of view of a reader 1*

The writing was badly done. And for a suck and fuck, cuckold, wimp story it was neither sexy or erotic. My questions center around whether or not she's pregnant and how many diseases she has picked up and passed along to her idiot husband. What kind of special fool pimps his wife out like this to a total stranger. This isn't a good fantasy. It's just nasty shit.

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Hey anonymous, where is your story? Criticism works both ways. Beware who you insult, you could get insulted yourself.

Sorry author, not going to read your story. Not my cup of tea. How do I know? Comments said it all.

grabs me by my arm, opens up the door, and throw my ass outside. As the door slams shut, I heard him shout. Good riddance. Now that's a proper ending. 1*