by OffTheLeash
Great characters and story but Damn, that was about the the most brutal coupling I've every read except for maybe torture stories. I was wincing all the way thru it and was glad when it was over. I'm not sure where your story is going but that level of pain and damage is a real turn off and will skim past in the future. I still want to know her story so will be sticking around for that in future chapters.