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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please continue. This is not what I was expecting but still like it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Still writing junk,

But at least we got a little plot and character development this time. At least what passes for such with you.

It actual feels like you just dropping rough outlines as completed stories. You might get a better reaction from people if you fleshed them out to actual full length tales and got a decent editor to take care of the legion of errors you leave in.

But doubt you will. Just not you your way to take actual advise. Not when there is spam to be a making.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...