All Comments on 'The Agency Ch. 08'

Completely Engrossing!

Normally, I would be screaming for more one on one action with any combination of male / female / cross dressing or any combination thereof. However, Ms_Allison, you have a special talent of captivating readers with Michelle’s thought processes and temporary mental conflicts in a beguiling way.

I just love the way Michelle’s confidence and the dialogue with herself if developing. This could only be written by a natural born female.

Brilliant.

The way you describe Michelle’s actions give that feeling of an actual person and the inner monologue that she has is consistently open and honest which gives such a wonderful insight to so many of her hopes and fears. The conversations she has with Babette and Allie show how much she questions everything and also hangs onto all of societies beliefs no matter how she truly feels. I get that it has to be two completely different lives when you go from a loner who has self esteem problems and few if any friends to then try to live the life of a hot girl that has fashion sense, cares about her looks, has friends she can count on and needs to learn a completely new lifestyle of sex, dating and interaction but you manage to explain all the issues and even the minutiae which makes this story all the better for it. This latest chapter has to be one of the most interesting and deepest yet as it appears that things are on the verge of coming to fruition which is something I have been looking forward to and wanting to see how it turns out. This has been one story that I have not read anything like it and continue to be deeply impressed by every bit of it. Thank you for giving me a new way to see something that I never really gave that much consideration to.

I absolutely love this series, can’t wait for the next chapter

That was wonderful, makes me wish that I was Michelle

Really loving this series, great storyline, well crafted engaging characters. Gets 6 stars from me ....

... but some grammatical oddities and redundancies, such as "up from downstairs." "Up" is obvious from "downstairs, so "from downstairs" would be better.

Also Dr. is an abbreviated title when used as part of a name, hence is capitalised and may be abbreviated, e.g. Dr. Brown or Doctor Brown.

In "the doctor entered," doctor is a profession or job description, not a title, so is not abbreviated or capitalised.

Otherwise your writing and grammar is outstanding, which is why these few are so odd.

Sorry to be that guy, but little details make the difference between 22 and 24 carat gold.

Strand

Smiling broadly ...... Nice set and game ...... But funny things happen in RL as well, as here Ms. Allison ...... I have been wearing always those victorian high collar lace ruffle puffy sleeve backbuttoned blouses and combined with a pleated long skirt ....... This was my style, backbutton was a must have ...... So for long i had my head shaved and then with an expansive suit and trendy leather shoes, i was kind of untouchable ...... Every day around 1.30 pm for one hour dinner time at my italian restaurant down town ...... And sometimea i was dressed in a victorian blouse and skirt ..... This was the time, a sales representative for Nike woman, a beauty started talking to me, " i have been here for some times while being in the city and every time, you dressed in a suit, your are so out of space, i would never talked to you. Now in your cute blouse and skirt, its like upside down inside out, a different person ......" ...... What i want to explain is, yeah femme outfitting is not just some you wear, this chamges your habitat your moves your speaking all in the end, so yes only clothes can change a personality ...... Great chapter Ms. Allison