All Comments on 'The Akua'

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yowseryowseralmost 3 years ago

Tropical

Lovely anthro theme, lush, inviting, immense potential. Would be even better if trimmed a bit (and almost made me stop reading when you introduced the 'giant cock' trope) but intriguing story-line.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love it can't wait for the next instalment or what happens when Jeremy gets hard in front of Kehea.

EdGuy1EdGuy1almost 3 years ago

I wonder where this story will go next, because i feel like this is set up for something bigger.

loepkfasloepkfasalmost 3 years ago

Outstanding, especially as set up to chief's and maybe french captain's plans. Definitely deserves more chapters.

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyalmost 3 years ago

Great start to an anticipated series. When I was younger I felt self conscious of my nude body but gradually as I was given compliments it didn't take me long to look forward to gettingn naked

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Curious as to where this will go. Although it is in the Gay Male category, to date this story has not been gay-related. Sure a few admiring looks at Jeremy’s naked body by both sexes but nothing definitive yet. Please post another chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love your stories! Please follow up with Akua to see what the village & the captain have in store for Jeremy.

Any of your stories are worthy of further chapters.

Aar322parAar322parover 2 years ago

Love this story!! Hopefully we get more chapters involving this stud.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dear gocarty! I started reading your stories yesterday. Already the first one was very good and they are getting better! Where does the Akua Tribe live? I want to see Jeremy's anatomy with my own eyes! :)

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