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Click hereYou nod, but she's not looking at you. You're frantically running through your recollection of what she just told you.
She blows past you, bending to grab a soft, tan leather gym bag next to the bed. You jog after her, trying to keep your brain from exploding.
She speaks as she walks quickly toward the elevator. "You would do well to learn le français rapidement, boy. When speaking privately I often mix French phrases in with English. I've been trying to control that for your sake, but my patience for that is limited. You'll simply have to keep up with me!" She taps the elevator call button.
"Come here boy. Kiss me."
You move in close, and she pulls you in with her free arm, her hand under your butt, squeezing it. She overwhelms you with a deep tongue kiss, biting your lower lip. You feel her scent invading you, and you swoon. The elevator bell rings, you hear the doors slide open, and she releases you with a sexy smile.
"Get it all done, boy!" She calls, now five feet away inside the elevator car.
Head reeling, you say, "Yes Mistress! Have a great workou..." The doors close.
- COMMENTS
Mikethe3DGuy2over 3 years agoAuthorI erroneously typed my DA username in a previous comment as "Mikethe3DGuy2". Apologies, it's actually MikeThat3DGuy.
Mikethe3DGuy2over 3 years agoAuthorI'm glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate all feedback, whether positive, negative or constructive. Thanks for taking the time.
Just writing Ch. 14 now. I also post these chapters on DeviantArt (Mikethat3DGuy), along with some 3D renderings related to the upcoming visual novel: images of Olivia, Brian, Nina, Kerren, the splash-page logo. Check it out if you like.
Mikethe3DGuy2over 3 years agoAuthorHave I mentioned the audio version here, on Literotica? I may have, just don't recall. In any case, I got chapter 1 recorded, and my reaction is mixed. It's very expensive, so even if I loved it, I can't exactly have the woman just go ahead and do the whole thing all at once. But also, it wasn't quite as amazing as my initial impression led me to think. In addition the woman never gave me a sample of the main female character's (Olivia) voice as I had requested several times. I just wanted a sentence or maybe a paragraph spoken, so I could get a sense of whether I liked her interpretation of the character. So this left me annoyed with her and not in such a hurry to record more chapters.
I will definitely post any new chapters here, as well as on DeviantArt (Mikethe3DGuy2). Thank you for your interest!
Anonymousover 3 years agoWhat happened to the Audio version ? + will you finish the text version here ? I prefer reading over listening so I wish you completed it here
