All Comments on 'The Alpha Males Ch. 00'

This is an interesting development. I would love to see more.

Great plot. This chapter could be expanded into long interesting novel with lots of characters and sexy scenes. But even as a build up it was interesting to read. Hope there will be more.

I find the concept of the alpha male in a sci fi setting petty hot, especially when the he is endowed with godlike powers and size. So, all and all I give your introduction A++ in my book.

The real hope is that you continue and take the time give the readers mind blowing sex scenes. It is one thing to write that the alphas has power over women, or even that the king alpha turned 5 women into his priestesses to satisfy his sexual needs. The image in my mind is pretty erotic but a far cry from actually drawing out the picture a super male sitting on a throne before a group of desperate females engaged in actively worshipping and praising him and his gigantic cock