All Comments on 'The Altercation Before Christmas'

A very good story. I like it a lot. Good luck in the contest.

Chapter 2 please. Is the weekend spoiled as far as sex goes? Does Mandi watch? Does Mandy join in? 4 girls, 3 guys--any 2 on 1 action? Possibilities.

Mandi is the only non-asshole in that cabin. Gee, her little brother teased her years ago and Darlene is still carrying a grudge? And she’s in law school? Grow up. Robbie should offer Mandi the option to leave or stay - but he should leave. Nothing good will come for him from staying there. He’s outnumbered and they’ve made it clear he will be cold shouldered the whole time if not abused.