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SirDigbyChickenCaesar11 months agoPage 2:
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Never change, Literotica.
The story's not -bad-, but it reads rather textbook-debate rather than honest convictions by real people. Zoe's pivot from reflexive "ew gay" to full-throated lesbian in all of five minutes feels too rushed; given how self-aware Marnie's established in the opening, I'd expect her to ease her into it with at least a -bit- of courtship rather than dive straight into the deep end.
