All Comments on 'The Anniversary'

How bout that…..an actual loving wife…..in Loving Wives.

A real Loving wife story. Thanks

Zero to 60? We learned nothing of her motivations

Awww, sweet.

No doubt people will complain because she didn't come to bed with another man's cum dripping out of her so her ambiguously gay husband could suck it out of her, but this is an actual loving wife, married to a man that actually loves her back. How refreshing.

Miracles do exist, an actual loving wife story on this site. Kudos! So refreshing and new.

Refreshing - reconnecting and both wanting to keep their marriage strong! 5*

Present tense? And where's the "extramarital?" Why not put in Romance or EC?

Good Loving Wife Story. 5*

OMG! An actual Loving Wife. Good job.

The changes of tense are jarring.

How about that. Another story in the wrong category by an author who probably took no time to read the LW description:

"Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more." @ Author: Notice the EXTRA-MARITAL word in there. 1* for being an idiot!

fantastic! 5 *'s, well written and glad to see true LW in LW

It would have been better if it were told from one point of view instead of two. First person, third person just doesn't cut it. Good story though and thank you for not making it another worthless cuck story.

5* - I appreciate a story about a real loving (not sarcastic) wife and couple facing their life together.

No drama, just fun.

Keep up the good work 5stars

Liked it but you'd probably do better putting it in Romance. LW is a brutal category as you'll see from some of the comments.

Pick a tense. This keeps switching between past and present tense.

Can't find fault with this, she is a loving wife.

How can so many normally intelligent people read stories on this site for so long and not catch on that this is a category about wives who cheat?

This was a perfect story for Romance or maybe even Erotic Coupling, but it AIN’T a match for Loving Wives, no matter how many readers mistakenly think it is.

WFY you can really write, so I’m not going to screw up your score by rating it what it deserves in this category. In Romance I’d rate it a solid 5, especially since you seem to be just starting. I can’t help but wonder just how good you will become with experience.

Thanks for the effort. cd

There is no story plot here at all.

Thank you. I enjoyed that.

Holy shit.....a decent story.

How dare you do that during Cuck month!!

Wow a story about an actual loving couple. No drama. No cheating. No swapping. No cucking. Just good old fashioned sex between a married couple. I bet the swappers and sharers and cucks will hate the story.

Probably if in another part of this site. It would have attracted much interest. LOVE. slap*hapy*papy#9

This is for romance category

Good LW story, but it will not make the cuck fans happy.

Kind of boring. I’m curious as to why you posted this in this category? You see, if you actually had read the description of the category, you would know that it’s about wives having sex with other men. Your story would be much more appreciated in the romance category.

To the idiot anonymous commenter who elected himself the category sheriff. What do you think “and more” means?

True LW story. This is really rare.

Thank you for posting a story in the right category.

It's so rare.

More a vignette than an actual story. A story needs conflict, complications.

Hate to tell you, but this should be in erotic couplings or romance.

Loving Wives:

Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more

That aside, it would have been so much better if you had chosen one tense and stuck with it. You kept moving from past to present.

She bites her lip as her fingernails drag through his hair.

Steve's cock pulsed as she hovered over him, still not allowing full penetration.

Two sentences, back-to-back, one in present tense and one in past tense. Before you submit another story, please, please, PLEASE get an editor/proofreader.