All Comments on 'The Artist'

Loving the build-up and potential direction. More, More please part 2 plus

Thank you for writing

Reminds me of that Sex and the City episode where prudish Charlotte posed for the oil painting. This was better, of course. 5 stars.

Absolutely delicious!

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Wonderful! You write so well, very erotic and very readable

Wonderfully well constructed, and equally well told.

Sexy turn on once it gets going. But the intro is all confused and confusing. Aysha and Alyssa, the scientist and the marketing rep, Antactica and where ever -- how are we supposed to understand any of that?

Author here! Apologies for the formatting issue - it seems that my chapter breaks didn't make it into the upload, so it kind of runs together in places. Trying to get an edit submitted!

Very interest, hoping for a continuation

Can't wait to hear the next part!

Brilliantly done. Loved it from the first sentence. Please continue.

I loved your story. Getting the thoughts and feelings from both sides made it that much more erotic and relatable. I really hope you decide to write a part two.

Pls write more

This story was so well written and captivating! Thank you for sharing it with us!! I sincerely hope you will write a part two!

Some of the best writing not in a book, that I've read in a very long time. And IMHO it rivals a lot of what I've read over the years! Please, please continue. Appreciate you so very much!

LeoVirgoCusp U.S.A.

I come back to this story at least once a month. Please, I beg of you, write more.