All Comments on 'The Ascent of a Woman Pt. 02'

by garterbelt

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WeitzeWeitze7 months ago

Story went well till the last third where there were a lot of wrong, missing, incomplete sentences and inconsistencies. PROOFREAD.

Story idea is great.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

WTF was this? 1*

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I am a girl who prefers satin, lace, hose and heels to cotton, denim and sneakers. I enjoy the company of men. I like to work but it gets lonely and I get horny on the road.